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For Illiza's last blessing. It will be a jar that can take away someone's hope, leaving them in despair. The jar can hold the hope up to 30 minutes before it is let go back to the person it was taken from. Then, she is able to use the hope to give herself a boost or someone else for 3 hours. This can be used once every three days

Okay, first off....Tried a new style here with comicing....Kinda wish I didn't since it didn't work well environment wise, but for some parts I like it. I'll have to see about working with it over time.
We'll see how the quest turns out later....8'D
A bit rushed since CTF is happening in DR and I need to be active, but I tried a few new things still....Here's to the learning curb.
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ShadowsAndLight Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I have to say, I absolutely adore this comic even if I waited this long to actually comment.
I love your version of Eris, she's not only amazing but also a very accurate depiction of what she might look and act like in the canon, yo.
And her interactions with Illiza are just priceless.
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Iced-over Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Very heartwarming mother-daughter moment. |3 Also the "safer not to ask" moments are hilarious~
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chiyokins Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was great, Nisa! I really loved Illiza and Eris' interactions. Gotta' say, reading this makes me kinda' want to make an Eris kid. XD
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Hyuu-Chuu Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
fff I totally forgot to comment on how friggen amazing this is~

I enjoyed every minute, the way it flowed, Eris's design and behavior~ <3 It was just amazing! I don't think it seems rushed at all, and all your work paid off

heee, Kablam~ <3 The explosive exit that all Eris's children must do now to honor their mother
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Slawton Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student General Artist
WOW!
Love love love!
Eris' design is fresh and fantastic! the Mother / Daughter relationship is entertaining and yet realistic. The panels flow well and have a storyboard likeness. You have done a fantastic job and even though you say it is a bit rushed- I think you have outdone your last flash comic!
Bravo!
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chikenpeasoup Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Faaaaarrr ouutttt! I'm so impressed! That was brilliant Nisa, you're an absolute creative tank! Man Eris is so rad too, she's so snarky haha :heart:
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ForAdventure Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012   Digital Artist
This is so amazing, the expressions and dialogue are clever, the art is superb, and Eris' entrances and exits were priceless~
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Narakyo Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
I love Eris' biker look so much XD And how she magically pulls things out of her jacket lols XD
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Ranya-Ni Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh goodness where to start. You really did a wonderful job so I want to put a lot of thought into this reply.

Lessee, great work with the facial expressions. I can never get over the wide rage of expressions on Illiza's face. They really add to the story in the good old fashioned 'show don't tell' way. Eris' design is great and I must say I love the black lips. It gives her a very biker chick sorta vibe and I really enjoy it.

The pacing in this comic is better than the last one, but it drags a little bit in the middle when she's getting into her house. I think perhaps some slightly more dynamic angles for the house would make it more interesting. As it stands now, it's a little stagnate until the character come in. I think the only other thing I would work on besides that is making sure your back and forth buttons aren't in the way of your speech bubbles. It makes it a little hard to stay in the flow of things when there is a button in front of words.

I really felt like you improved with this comic though and I love what you did with it. I always love the flash formatting for these things too, it makes it a lot of fun to read them. Keep it up!

(And are you making another character next? Who is it?)
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Nisassa Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Thanks so much for the advice again. I dont know if you realize just how helpful it is. Especially with her quest being the next big comic I need to do. Thanks 8) <3
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